01 / BRIEF AND EVIDENCE
What the role needs
Financial modelling, written analysis and support for transactions.
Facts available for this sample
Finance intern who assembled peer data, built a three-statement model in Excel and summarised valuation inputs for an internal review.
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02 / REWRITING THE BULLET
Make the contribution visible
BEFORE
Helped with financial analysis and prepared reports for the team.
AFTER
Built a three-statement Excel model, compared valuation inputs across a peer set and summarised the assumptions for an internal deal review.
What I would check with the candidate
Check which models the candidate built, what was reviewed and whether the analysis supported a live transaction. Use the firm’s terminology only where the experience supports it.